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January, 17, 2011                                sunny

    There are three windows in my home. When I was doing my homework, I often looked outside. There is a big grass ground outside the window. And there is some Poinciana on the grass ground. And there is a big mountain near the big grass ground. There is a people armed police on the mountain. When I was learning early morning, I heard the bugle sounds from that mountain. It encouraged me read and read. There is another window in the sitting room. I can see convention center outside that window. And I often hear singing and broadcast from the convention center. It looks like a big egret will fly. And the last one is a window in my bedroom. Outside that is a grass ground too. But there are many mouse holes on that grass ground. After some cats moved to that ground. Mice never running on that grass ground. 


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雪梅 引用 删除 snow5678   /   2011-01-19 22:24:19
从你的英文日志来判断,是属于一般现在事态。而When I was doing my homework,这句是过去进行时 I often looked outside.这句是一般过去时,这两句应改为现在时态。
When I am doing my homework, I often look outside.
苍茫夜色的个人空间 引用 删除 苍茫夜色   /   2011-01-17 15:10:49
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