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June 23, 2011                           sunny

Chen has a large circle of friends and is very popular at parties. Everybody admires him for his great sense of humor. It makes everybody laughing. That day it was Li’s birthday and many friends came. His friends asked him to make a speech at Lin’s birthday. This is the sort of thing that Chen loves. He prepared the speech carefully and went to the birthday. He had included a large number of funny stories in the speech and of course, it was a great success. He said, ‘Let us wishes Mr. Li long-fu, such as the East China Sea and got a perfect score every time! And wish him long-fu, such as the pine never old on the south China Mountain and got perfect score all around victory. ’ Everybody was clapping but Li can’t smile because this half test he failed in English and physics. He has just had criticism from his dad. He thought Chen laughing at him in so many people, so he was unhappy.

(仿NCE2 Lesson63 She was not amused

陈同学在班上深受欢迎,人人都钦佩他那绝妙的幽默感。他会在各种场合说笑话,逗得大家哈哈大笑。那一天李同学生日,来了好多朋友,陈也去了。朋友请他在生日宴会上致贺词,这正正是陈喜欢做的事情。他认真准备了讲稿,还在贺词中加入了大量逗人发笑的小故事,他说:“我们祝李同学‘福如东海长流水,流的都是100分;寿比南山不老松,科科(棵棵)成绩满堂红”引得大家拍手称赞,可是李同学却笑不起来 ,因为这次期中考,他英语和物理两科不及格。早上才刚刚挨了爸爸的批评。他认为陈同学当着这么多人嘲笑了他,当然就不高兴了。

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引用 删除 czpxiamen   /   2011-06-23 18:28:48
万分感谢博友“魔术草叶”的留言,这是我写博以来第一次遇到这么诚恳认真的留言!再次感谢!
linxihong魔术草叶的个人空间 引用 删除 魔术草叶   /   2011-06-23 17:13:01
Let us wishes Mr. Li long-fu,
let  后面应该接动词原形哦,所以应该是wish
总体写的挺好的。而且每次看你都有坚持写。很棒啊!!! 小细节方面要注意!
linxihong魔术草叶的个人空间 引用 删除 魔术草叶   /   2011-06-23 17:09:42
Everybody was clapping but Li can’t smile because this half test he failed in English and physics.    当中can't应该用过去式吧。呵呵,小细节也要注意哦。。。。
linxihong魔术草叶的个人空间 引用 删除 魔术草叶   /   2011-06-23 17:08:11
哈哈,写的挺好的。。
有几点小建议哦,文章中的时态最好保持一致。如His friends asked him to make a speech at Lin’s birthday. This is the sort of thing that Chen loves. He prepared the speech carefully and went to the birthday.  三句话当中,第一三句都是过去式,第二句是现在时。其实第二句用过去时也是可以的。。呵呵。。
香博博的个人空间 引用 删除 香博博   /   2011-06-23 14:28:32
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